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Showing posts with label dialogue. Show all posts

Thursday, September 15, 2011

Revision Ideas for Dialogue Junkies

There are at least three of us in my writing group that just love to write dialogue.  We're perhaps a little tooo comfortable writing dialogue.  Like, maybe sometimes all a page is - is dialogue. 

I have to share this great post on the topic, How to Turn a Novel into a Textbook by Maggie Stiefvater.  Maggie takes a page from one of her novels and then tells us how it might have looked when she was starting out.  It would have been all dialogue.  A page of dialogue.

Then she walks us through some great revision ideas.  She lists "the questions I would ask myself looking at a page like this."  My favorite is "How is the writer showing a pause in dialog? By saying "she paused" or by inserting a non-dialogue paragraph?" (I had a total aha moment reading this one. LOVE IT.)  I also like "How is setting worked in?" and "Can I imagine myself there?  Why?"

Give it a look-see and let me know what you think!